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Cause and Effect Essay


 * Brainstorming**: Fuel, Humanity, Alternative energies, Frequency, Weather, Overuse, Energy.

Thesis statement: Global warming is a problem which represents a threat for humanity thanks to the unlimited use of fuel for energy, the overuse of non-renewable resource__s a__nd the toxic pollutants thrown by industry factories. **//__Add a serial comma.__//**


 * Outline:**

The unlimited use of fuel.
 * Alternative energies
 * Humanity

Overuse of non-renewable resources.
 * Climate change __**//Off topic.//**__
 * Natural phenomena __**//Off topic.//**__

The patterns of climate change on the world are caused by industry. **//__This does not align to your thesis statement above.__//**
 * Weather __**//Does not align with your body paragraph below.//**__
 * Frequency __**//Frequency of what?//**__


 * Essay**

Global warming is more than a problem for humanity. According to Venkataramanan (2007) “Global warming is defined as the increase of the average temperature on Earth”. (p.226). Global warming is caused by nature and human factors. For example, the nature causes are a normal process of earth; in contrast, man-made causes are related with the misuse of natural resources. As a result of this processes, global warming is a problem which represents a threat for humanity thanks to the unlimited use of fuel for energy, the overuse of non-renewable resources and the toxic pollutants thrown by industry factories.

The unlimited use of fuel is causing that earth suffers the consequences. **//__Your topic sentence is vague.__//** Instead of using alternative energy sources, scientists have not found the appropriate way to adapt this kind of sources as resources (Kaygusuz, 2010). **//__Off topic.__//** For that reason, people are consuming more electricity, carbon and gas (Venkataramanan, 2007). Today, it has been found that the most harmful pollutants are product of human. For example, the unlimited use of fuel for industry, the overuse of energy at home, the toxic pollutants thrown by industry factories cause a lot of damage to the earth’s atmosphere. The people can contribute to change the result of this problem. **//__Review the differences between evidence and analysis sentences.__//**

Most common causes of global warming are producing an overuse of non-renewable resources. In fact, the global warming causes that heat be retained in the earth’s atmosphere for a long period of time (Venkataramanan, 2007). As a result of this phenomenon, occurs the famous climate change (Kaygusuz, 2010). The climate change is causing overheating, the melting of the poles, and the death of living beings. Actually, these phenomenas produces tornados, hurricanes and typhoons which were produced by natural causes.

Toxic pollutants __thrown by industry factories__ are changing the patterns of climate around of the world. The increasing of pollutants in rivers and lakes are causing several changes in the weather of a lot of countries around of the world (Venkataramanan, 2007). For example, sea levels are raising duo to thermal expansion of the ocean, changes in temperatur__e a__nd precipitation patterns increase the frequency, duration and intensity of extreme weather (Kaygusuz, 2010). **//__Serial comma is missing.__//** For that reason, it is necessary to create new forms of energy. **//__Reword.__//** Despite of these disasters people do not realize that they are causing global warming.

Most of the time people do not get the meaning of global warming. In scientists point of view people have to do a lot of changes to get better the life on earth. We know that the nature is one of the causes but we are another, so we can make a change if we want. In all aspects, humanity is causing the global warming. At the same time global warming is a problem which represents a threat for humanity thanks to the unlimited use of fuel for energy, the overuse of non-renewable resources and the toxic pollutants thrown by industry.


 * References**

Kaygusuz, K. (2010). Energy sources part b economics, planning & policy //Taylor and Francis Journal.// 133-146. **//__See APA.__//** Venkataramanan, M. (2007). Causes and effects of global warming //Indian Journal of Science & Technology//. 226-229. **//__See APA.__//**

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