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I learned to grow-up following my destiny. a) Medicine was one of my favorites. b) I had the opportunity to study odontology. c) I selected my future career "LDDI".

Essay
When you really want something all the universe conspires for you to make you wish; Paulo Cohelo. I used to think that the process highschool-university would be easy and relax. Perhaps for some persons yes; but in my case it was so hard and difficult. When I was a child I said that I would p__s__ychologist or doctor because I wanted to help people. At first in my higschool, talk about my future was not a interested thing but at the end I was so nervous. All the people asked me; "what I would study?" and, honestly it question killed me for a time although I had two options: the first was transact a scholarship to study medicine in Cuba or the second study to be an English teacher. When I saw my future in front of me, I started to study more because the future is dependent of the present and I had to create a balance to connect my present life with the future.

I learned to grow-up following my destiny. I was confused about what I will study and, honestly I thought that I could study any career. Medicine was one of my favorites although, the dead people scared me a little. I really was so interesed and I studied so hard to enter in Zacatecas but, I could not with the exam. I was so sad, for a moment I felt unsuccesfull. However I had the opportunity to study odontology but it was not my vocation so I prefer to do an exam in Aguascalientes. I selected my future career "LDDI" after I had been though much about my vocation. I think that with this process I grew more than ever as person also, I learned to do the things by myself althoug this meaning be alone.

Nowadays I can say that the present is going fine and that I am walking into the future. I guess that I found my destiny. It is a big challenge to me even for the others persons. Sometimes It is difficult make your dreams come true but it is not impossible. Now I am studying to be English teacher although I wish I knew what is study medicine in Cuba. I hope to finish my career with good grades and results.

Writing Goals
//I think that one of my most important goals is to write better and have interesting ideas. Also I learn many conectors to use in my essay of the future. Besides now I can develop topics more easy because I know the correct structure and the steps to do a good job. I really hope to improve my writing skill and apply more strategies and vocabulary.//

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I just can say that I am learnig better thank to my teacher Benjamin because he helps me how I have to do my essay.
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