Clara

Cause and Effect Essay


 * Brainstorming:** Teenage mother, son, daughter, life, responsibility, hobby, travel, study, time, learnt, effect, physical, emotional, baby, death, dangerous, sickness, financial, abortion, insecurity, depression, happiness, economic.


 * Outline**
 * Thesis statement:** Being a teenage mother has many changes in life of women, such as physical, emotional and financial causes.

Physical Effect • A teenage pregnancy has more risk to have pregnancy complications. • Is more common to have preterm births. Emotional Effect • To have supporting of family. • Supporting of friend. Financial Effect • Support of Government. • Discrimination in job.


 * Effects of Teenage Pregnancy.**

Teenage pregnancy is very common** currently ** in many countries around the world. It is** shocking ** that with the teenage pregnancy on rise, people rarely discuss with theirs teens about it consequences that several.Parents have a very good communication with their children. __Been a teenage__ pregnant has many changes in life of woman, such as physical, emotional and financial effects. Your thesis statement should be the same as you have above, in your outline.

Physical effects have many risks in teenage pregnancy; some of them are pregnancy complications in adittion is more common for her to have **preterm** births. According to Grover & Sandhu (2009), “A teenage mother is at greater risk than women over age 20 for pregnancy complications, such as premature labor, anemia and pre-eclampsia these risks are even greater for teens who are under 15 years” (p.42)."Mounting evidence suggests that low birth weight and preterm births are higher in teenage mothers"(Population Council Unexplored elements of adolescence in the developing world, 2006, p.18). Many problems about physical changes a teenager pregnancy can get but these are some of most dangerous. Another important consequence respect to emotional effect.

Teenage mother needs the support of family and friends because they influent a lot in the emotional effect. “Although social support, in general, lower distress in pregnant and parenting adolescents, its positive benefit have been most often associated with positive familial support” (Bogat, G. etal,1998, p. 550)."Many researchers agree that, within the family, the primary asset for helping adolescents cope with parental roles is their own mothers" (Colletta & Gregg, 1981; de Anda & Becerra, 1984; Unger & Wandersman, 1985). Also for teenage mother to has the supporting of her friends help significantly to her. Financial effect is also another consequence of teenage pregnancy.

Also another powerful change in teenage pregnancy is the __financial effect__ **//__V__////__ague__//**. "Recent studies have confirmed the association between socioeconomic disadvantage and teenage pregnancy".(Austerberry & Wiggins, 2007, p.4).” This was a pilot government initiative** aiming **to reduce the risk of long-term social exclusion associated with teenage pregnancy by “providing intensive, support by parents and children to help them with housing, health care, parenting skills, education and child care” (Austerberry & Wiggins, 2007, p. 5). The previous is an example of as government work for help to teenage pregnancy about financial in London because in many places teenage pregnancy are discriminate for to be pregnant. So they cannot support yourself.

People __had to think many times before to do__ **//__Awkward.__//** something that can change your whole life. Being a teenage pregnancy mother has many changes in life of teenage mother in different aspects such as physical, emotional and financial effects. Parents __have to had__ **//__Review verb tenses.__//** a good communication with their children. So there are many things that is good to know for all of them what can happen in adittion **//__Word missing.__//** how can change their life with an ** oversight .**


 * References**

Austerberry, H. & Wiggins, M. (2007).Taking a pro-choice perspective on promoting inclusion of teenage mothers: Lessons from an evaluation of the Sure Start Plus programme. //Critical Public Health,17//(1), 3-15.

Bogat, G. (1998) Structure and stability of maternal support among pregnant and parenting adolescents. //Journal of Community Psychology, 26//(6), 549-568.

Gover, N. & Sandhu, k. (2009). Teenage pregnancy: Too much too soon.//Journal of South Asian Federation of Obstetrics & Gynecology, 1//(3), 42-43.

."Mounting evidence suggests that low birth weight and preterm births are higher in teenage mothers"(Population Council Unexplored elements of adolescence in the developing world, 2006, p.43).

"Many researchers agree that, within the family, the primary asset for helping adolescents cope with parental roles is their own mothers" (Colletta & Gregg, 1981; de Anda & Becerra, 1984; Unger & Wandersman, 1985).
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