final14

Brainstorming: computers, early age, children, libraries, intellectual development, updated, distractions, sedentary, etc. Thesis statement : The use of computers in early age could have some positive and negative effects. Outline: 1.- Children will be more updated about the sources of information. (**//__This idea does not appear in your first body paragraph.)__//** -With the use of the internet children could search anyone information. -Children could use the computers to develop their intellectual skills.

2.-The use of the computers will replace the libraries. -Children will not have to go to libraries to search in books. -The libraries will have to be more updated.

3.-The use of the computers could provoke the sedentary. -Some children could use the computers as a way of entertainment. -The internet could provoke distractions.


 * Effects of the Use of the Computers in Early age** by Hugo Canizalez.

These days are common that people of early age use computers as a way of learning. In the schools teachers are teaching at the students about how using a computer because is important to know about it. For that reason some people think that the use of computers must be learned in early age so that in the future they could develop their intellectual skills. However the use of computers in early age could have some positive and negative effects such as children will be more updated, the libraries cease to exist, and it will provoke the sedentary.


 * //__This topic sentence does not relate to your online, item 1.__//** A positive effect is that the children could develop their intellectual skills. With the use of the internet people of early age could search anyone information without the necessity to use a book. __These refers__ that children could search __in internet__ any information that they could be interested with more facility that in the past, when people searched in several books. For that reason children could be more updated about recently information without the help of a book.

__Another effect __ is the libraries will be replaced because with the use of the internet it w ill not necessary the use of books. In the past people had to go to libraries because the books were the unique way of information. But these nowadays people who search any information no longer use the books because are more easy search in internet. For that reason the libraries will have to be more updated about the recently information or will have not exist.

A negative effect is that children will be more sedentary because they enjoy the use of computers and they might __forget the physical activities__. For example in these nowadays is common that some children use the computers as a way of entertainment because children are more interested in computer games and watching videos __in internet__. For that reason children could be more distracted and they could not __learning__ and develop their intellectual skills. It is important to note when children use the computers only do for a short time and not forget the physical activities so that children will not sedentary.

In conclusion the use of the internet in early age could be effective but it __depend the use that people get__. For example if the children use the computers as a way of entertainment they could not learning and they will not develop their intellectual skills. However If children use computers correctly and avoid any distraction these could more effective to learn. For that reason is essential that if teachers want to use computers to teach at the students they must search the effective way to use computers to learn correctly and avoid distractions.