Narrative7

[|Brainstorming]:
= The decision to become a teacher. =
 * High school
 * Good experiences
 * Foreign people
 * Friends
 * Future
 * New school
 * Courses

[|Sentence outline]:
Thesis: //Add your thesis here.// I. Claim 1 My English class in high school. a. The dynamic during the class b. Good assignment for me. II. Claim 2 Meting a foreign people. a.An American guy in high school b. My friendship with the American guy. III. Claim 3 Private English course a.The influence of my brother. b. ESLI school.
 * 1) How did the teacher teacher?
 * 2) Environment within the class.

Essay:
//After reviewing the criteria for your essay, begin writing here based on your sentence// //outline above// //"Teaching is leaving a vestige of oneself in the development of another. And surely the student is a bank where you can deposit your most precious treasures."-Eugene P. Bertin.// //On// adolescence I never thought what was going to happen in the future. During this stage everything was perfect and relaxing, but the dilemma __comes__ in high school. It was __the transcendental__ moment to decide what I was going to do after I finished the high school and __what about my future__. My final decision was influenced by different situations starting how __to ** awaken ** interest__ in English when I was younger, the people who gave me __advices__ and the way those __** councils **__ changed my point of view in different times and how particular people introduced me more in the English and comparing good and bad experiences about it. //**Check your comma usage in prior sentence**//. Nobody __say that take decisions__ are easy but after a long process everything was clearer to decide. While I was in high school the most interesting and in which I was good it was English cla__ss, f__or different reason for example the classes were so dynamic, all the time or most of the time the high school teacher did games in the way all the students could understand the topic she was teaching, besides all the material that she used was colorful, so the class was attractive for everyone. //**Your first sentence is too long.**// Another advantage of this class was that the teacher lived some years in USA, for this she speaks nice the English and she used to taught about the culture from this country.Thus I became interested in this subject but I never think about became a teacher. //**Each paragraph should have at least four sentences. Follow the MEAL plan.**// ​By the time I studied the last year in high school I met a foreign guy. He entered as __a exchange__ because his parents wanted __that he learned__ Spanish, so they decided to send their soon to Aguascalientes, his name is Andrew. //**Prior sentence too long.**// He started to become popular since he arrived to the high school because he plays basketball and he is very good __in this sport__. Taking advantage of this the boss asked him if he could be //**Missing an article**//. assistant in the English class __in this form__ the students could learn the pronunciation of English language. //**Prior sentence too long.**// At the beginning I began to talk with him, hence I helped him in some cases to communicate something that he could not explain. __Every time__ I was more familiar with the English. During the three years in high school I studied an English course, well actually were 3 years and five months, there I learned the basic things about English, I knew the institution because of my brother; he felt his English class in the university so he wanted to take a course for passing his exam.How I saw that he learned so fast I decided to ** sign up ** there, the school name is ESLI, beside of all of this the school is so near from my house. __**Prior sentence too long.**__ The time I stood there I met nice people for example a girl that since that moment is my best friend and my boyfriend. Despite all of this I never thought that my future will be as an English teacher but different situations make me think of being a teacher. The university is a new world, a new beginning to build my life. All the confusion __passed it__ and everything started to be clear. I chose the major that I considered as interesting and in which __exist__ more opportunity to work, so I decided to study English Language Teaching. To become a teacher is not just a professio__n y a__ way to ** enrich ** my experiences, my knowledge and my ** soul ** because since I __stared__ all the process I´ve known great people and acquire more __costumes__ and habits that help me to be a better person and give something of my to other people. //**Prior sentence too long.**// I´m proud of my decision even this is just the beginning.