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Narrative Essay Brainstorming: sister, travel, happy, exit ting, documentation, country, like. Confuse, decision, family, return

Sentence outline:

My travel to Mexico

I. My sister proposed me

a. I felt happy and exciting

b. I started to order my documentation

II. The trip

a.I felt exciting

b. I saw my sister

c.I met the country

III. My sister proposed to me live here

a.I was confuse

I get a decision Essay:

The trip that changed my life. "Travel is more than the seeing of sights; it is a change that goes on, deep and permanent, in the ideas of living." Miriam Beard. Since I was a child, I always wanted to __ meet Mexico __. I knew and like “the Mariachi” because my father always listened this kind of music. I always __ wished travel __ here. My trip in this country really changed a lot my plans in my life. This trip was one of the most important moments in my life. My sister who lives in Mexico changed all my plans, when she gave to me the opportunity of travel to Mexico. It was in July of 2008, when I was in my house with my father in Paraguay. He told me that my sister wanted to bring to me to Mexico on my vacation, and when I knew this, I felt really happy, and in these week, I started to order my documentation. //**Each paragraph should have at least four sentences – your last sentence has too many clauses.**// In January of 2009, I began my __ trip, I __ remember that I felt very enkindled and happy. When I arrived at the airport, and I saw my sister after five__ year, I felt __ extremely glad, and I cried a lot __ of emotion .__ Since the next day of my __ arrived __ to Mexico, I started to __ met __ some places __ of here __ with my sister. I was really exciting and surprised of costumes, food, //**(Serial comma missing.)**// and places. I __was knew__ in this country, and I liked almost every thing I __knew__ about places, food and people. Yet, my sister had a big surprise for me. With my sister, I enjoyed my vacation a lot. She did not want that I returned in my country, so she proposed to me to live with her. When this happened I felt happy. But after minutes, I was misled, because I was not sure if I wanted this. Because I did not wanted to separate of my family and friends. It was very difficult for me decided. But after I thought a lot, and talked with my sister. I decided to return to Paraguay to finish High School. __ And after come back __to Mexico to live and start my major. Now, I do not regret about this misstep and my decision, __about I got this trip and my decision of live in Mexico.__ I really __relished__ and I continue. This trip really was one of the most important moments in my life. //**Why?**// This event changed my life because was a big change of life style for me. //**How?**// This trip gave me chance of knew and live in Mexican culture, and since today I am enjoy this opportunity. //**Create a space between each paragraph. Also, you are missing your five new vocabulary words.**//