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Children are learning to use computers at a very early age. What are some effects (positive or negative) that computers can have on the intellectual development of children? ** Brainstorm ** computers smart kids mental problems intelligent addiction dependent aggressive fat people kids do not need a lot the computer physical problems obesity ** Outline ** 1st Body paragraph: Physical problems. a) Obesity, gain weight or problems with the health. b) Vision problems. 2nd Body paragraph: Psychological and social problems. a) The excessive use of the computers get kids aggressive b) Children depend a lot of the computers c) Social risk: rape and kidnapping

3rd Body paragraph: It is important to know how to use the computer and take the advantage of computers. a) It is necessary to have basic knowledge of computer Thesis statement  Children should not learn to use the computer at a very early age because they do not need it and it provokes physical and mental problems.

** Why children Should Not Use the Computer at Early Age **
 * By Silva Karol **

Nowadays __to know__ use the computer is very necessary, because the technology is in all places in the world. But, should it be __good kids__ __use__ the computer at very early age? __Kids__ in this decade are very attached to technology, and it has provoked several damages in children. It is known that nowadays people need to use computers in all professions; it is almost sure that people will need to use the computer at least once in their life. But it does not mean that people __at early__ age have to __know to use__ the computer. Children should not learn to use the computer at a very early age because they do not need it and it provokes physical and mental problems. There are a lot of consequences using the computer excessively such as obesity and blindness. It is proved people who use the computer too much and do not do exercise consequently gain weight. To be sitting all time __get lazy__ the metabolism __and provokes obesity__. Children are very active people, they have a lot of energy that needs to be exploited; if a child is sitting all time would not help to eliminate that energy and it will be a lazy kid and probably the child will be an overweight child years later. __Other problems to stay__ in front of a screen too much time are the vision problems. Vision problems may be caused by genetic or excessive time forcing the view. Children that are in front of a screen are more inclined to have vision problems, and they will have serious problems in the future. These are just some physical problems children may have if they use the computer too much at very early age.

As there are physical problems, also there are mental and social problems in children when they learn to use the computer a lot. The kid who uses a lot of the computer can become an addict and one effect of it is the kid will be more aggressive. To stay a lot of time in contact with the technology makes the child get away __to the__ society and the __kid unable__ to share opinions with other person__s.I__t can happen that a kid that knows how to use the computer may be addicted of it, and the __kid use__ the internet inadequate, there are parents do not observe their children when they are in the computer, but parents should know that children are exposed in the internet; the rape and kidnapping are good examples of these risks. There a lot of __reason__ why children should not use the computer at early age.

**//__You do not discuss how children should be able to use the computer in your topic sentence.__//** Although to use the computer when persons are very young have a lot of problems and risks, a lot of persons think that __use__ computer since kids is good for people. It is true that have knowledge of computers is very important and mainly necessary, because nowadays we need the computer everywhere. To improve the knowledge is important, and to have basic knowledge is crucial. Kids are starting in a new generation where computer is a basic element in all parts of the world. So they have the necessity to learn to use the computer but just the basic tools. Do not use it excessively and use the computer for the correct learning.

Despite __to know__ how to use the computer in early ages is good because they will need it in the future, there are a lot of problems and risks to know how to use the computer in very early age, as mental problems, physical problems and social risks. Children do not need the computer at __the age__, so the best thing is let them play and be happy as kids, they should not depend of computers. Children just need __the air fresh__ and waste the energy that they have, use real material they can touch and color; technology is not necessary for children. Children will need the technology but they will learn when they have the real necessity to use the computer. Children may improve intellectually when they learn to use the computer but there are a lot of risk and problems when they use the computer at very early age.