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Ruth Cristina Plascencia Gómez II Writing Course Teacher Benjamin Stewart Argumentative Essay How to reduce drunk-driving accidents in two steps?


 * Brainstorm**
 * Drunk people
 * Driving
 * Accident
 * Affect
 * Dead
 * Caution
 * Cars
 * Parties
 * Innocent people
 * Programs
 * Conferences
 * Statistics


 * Outline**


 * How to reduce drunk-driving accidents in two steps ? //__Add your name here.__//**

Thesis Statement .- Because of irresponsible __drinker people __, many ones die every year, so society has to stop the increase of dead caused by drunk-driving accidents.

I. - Dozens and dozens of people die caused by drunk-driving accidents. a) Sometimes people do not think about the consequences of their acts. b) Most of people who die in a drunk-driving accident are not people who drank alcohol.

II. - One of the best solutions could be that __Police__ check drivers continually. a) Police will be intelligent if they make some operatives to reduce drunk-driving accidents. b) If people know that Police will be attending those kinds of problems, the will be more caution at the time they are drinking and at the time they are driving.

III. - Another good solution could be that __Government __ make programs to teach people how to be responsible if they want to drink alcohol. a) Some people are unknown about how to drink in a responsible way. b) They need some guidance to know how to take care of their lives and the most important how to respect and take care of someone else´s lives.


 * Essay **


 * How to reduce drunk-driving accidents in two steps? //__Add your name here.__//**

<span style="display: block; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; text-align: justify;">Every year, every month, every day, every hour and every minute someone is dying caused by drunk-drivers. This is one of the main problems in our society. Because there are some irresponsible people who like drink alcohol, innocent people die. If you are a <range type="comment" id="893819">bad consumer of alcohol, <range type="comment" id="547318">you will bring to you problems, and also to a <range type="comment" id="302784">third people. But there are some things that society can do to combat this big problem. Because of irresponsible <range type="comment" id="440814">drinker people, many ones die every year, so society has to stop the increase of dead caused by drunk-driving accidents.

<span style="display: block; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; text-align: justify;">Dozens and dozens of people die caused by drunk-driving accidents. Every day people hear on the news that someone died in a car accident. Sometimes people do not think about the consequences of their acts. Many people who like drink are not responsible at the time they are drinking. So this could cause an accident if they are drivers also. Most of people who die in a drunk-driving accident are not people who drank alcohol. Most of __<range type="comment" id="336094">Bars __ and places where people can drink alcohol close until five or six of the morning. So people who are enjoying <range type="comment" id="774722">this attractive do not think that children, young people and the work force go out of their houses at the time they are going out from the __Bar__ or from any place where they are consuming alcohol. So if they have a car accident, they will not be the only ones who will be __<range type="comment" id="201589">implied __ in the already mentioned accident.

<span style="display: block; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; text-align: justify;">One of the best solutions <range type="comment" id="559975"> could be that <range type="comment" id="887030">Police check drivers continually. In some countries __Police__ tend to do __kind of operatives__ to check drivers. __This with__ the propose to know if they are really drunk, so they cannot drive in that state. If drivers are not able to drive in that condition, they have to pay a fine. Police <range type="comment" id="263592">will be intelligent if they make some operatives to reduce drunk-driving accidents. __They car is arrested__ also and they will be reprimanded, so it is less __probably__ they will be driving in the wrong way. If people know that Police will be attending those kinds of problems, __the will be more caution__ at the time they are drinking and at the time they are driving. So this will reduce a lot the drunk-driving accidents. And as a consequence __<range type="comment" id="636639">dies __ will be reduced also.

<span style="display: block; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; text-align: justify;">Another good solution __could be__ that __Government__ makes programs to teach people how to be responsible if they want to drink alcohol. <range type="comment" id="261456">Is not bad to drink alcohol. The wrong thing is that people do not know how to drink it. Some __people are unknown__ about how to drink in a responsible way. So it __could be__ a good idea to give conferences to drivers. Maybe at the time they are asking for a license to drive. They need some guidance to know how to take care of their lives and the most important how to respect and take care of someone else´s lives. __Every ones__ lives are very important, so it is unjust that people do not have control of their minds and respect the life.

<span style="display: block; font-family: Arial,sans-serif; text-align: justify;">So we have seen some solutions to the problem of drunk-driving accidents. It is important to take these <range type="comment" id="169990">advices so drivers can respect the life. This also will make public road __saver__ than before. After this detailed explanation of solutions to the drunk-driving problem society has to know that it is necessary to apply those advices. The most important will be always __the life__. This is the main thing we have. If we do not have life we do not have anything. <range type="comment" id="358290">It is not impossible. So worth it make an extra effort to combat this drunk-driving problem.