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Narrative Essay SCORPIONS CONCERT “[|The best way to waste your life, … is by taking notes. The easiest way to avoid living is to just watch. Look for the details. Report. Don't participate.]” -Chuk Palahniuk. There were many things that I __could enjoy__, but the sensation of being in a rock concert was unique. People often seek something that makes them to reach the nirvana condition. Aztecs __use to__ play with a heavy leather ball, which players had to get in a steel hoop. In South Africa Zulu tribe use to dance with the sounds of drums. Other cultures from Papua and New Guinea create musical instruments with animal bones, these aboriginal use to dance around a sacred fire. __I have my own ritual too. I use to go to rock concerts like Scorpions__. //**Is it still a ritual?**// There are many places that make me feel happy but, __none__ like rock concerts. When I was a kid, I had many wishes but there was one very specia__l,__ going to //**You are missing an article here.**// Scorpions concert. I used to __listen__ music such as: pop. hip hop, and Mexican popular music. One day my friend Ivan gave me a disc of this rock ban__d,__ when I heard i__t;__ I was surprised at how well they played and from then, I'm //**Article usage.**// fan about Scorpions. Later I __brought__ whole discography and shared it with friends. When we realized that the band would come to Mexico; We promised that we would be there that day. My friends and I __consulted__ the date and ticket prices__,__ when I saw those prices were very expensive__, We__ felt very sad. The days passe__d;__ suddenly my friend Carlos got a great idea__,__ he suggested us that we organized an school raffle of something, like gadgets, tequila bottle or something like that. We thought it would be an amazing idea. Three days later we had already raffle tickets printed. We decided to raffle off __an__ cell phone and an iPod. We sold all tickets and got more money than necessar__y. f__inally we bought 4 tickets for the rock concert. The day finally came. My friends and I __dated in__ Carlos's house, and we started our trip totally excited. We began to drink some __beers__ and sing the greatest rock hits of the seventies and eighties. __Few hour__ after I fell asleep because the concert __was to__ Monterrey. I felt a hand over my shoulder, it was my friend Edi trying to awake me. Finally, we had arrived to the "Coca-Cola arena". There were many pretty girls outside and inside the place. I still felt a little drunk when __Article usage.__ lights came on and the concert began. The show was simply spectacular, all around was illuminated by stars and purple moons, the sound of the guitars and drums were impressive. I danced "slam" all night long and my friends spent an incredible time too. There are many things that I love __to do, on__e of those things is going to rock concerts. I hope one day having the opportunity to enjoy again an experience like that. I personally think this concert changed my life because it made me realize that how difficult is getting what we want but, I also understood that if I wish something special, I must strive to get it. I can say that Scorpions concert was the best experience that I ever had until now. //**You are missing your five new vocabulary words.**//