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 3) Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


 * Brainstorm:** money, unfair, doctors, fireman, salary, deserve, free, good, bad, pretty faces, good atheletes, good actors.


 * Thesis statement :** Athletes and entertainers do not deserve to earn a lot of money __by doing nothing so earn it according to their activities __ . (**//__Your thesis is vague. Rephrase.__//**)


 * Outline:**

1. People who appear in TV does not deserve to earn a high amount of money. a) Their payment should be reduced. b) People who risk their life should win more money.

2. TV stars should earn money according to their activities (**//__This is contrary to your thesis, isn't it?__//**) a) Some athletes do not work hard and receive money by just doing tv comercials. b) They should donate their money to associations, It could be helpful.

3. Maybe some athletes deserve it by doing exercise. a) They work really hard. b) Entertainers and TV stars receive money just by their pretty faces.


 * Wrong destination of the money. **

By Patricia Alonso Fernandez.

The exagerated payment of TV stars is ridiculous __regardless other people __. There a lot of people who work really hard, but it means nothing compared to __this athletes__ and TV stars. They earn more money than people who really deserve it, for example a good doctor who __save__ lives. That is why some good people do not get the __apreciation to__ their work that they deserve. Athletes and entertainers do not deserve to earn a lot of money by doing nothing so earn it according to their activities.

People who appear __in__ TV must not receive a high amount of money. Their payment should be reduced. People who risk their life deserve more money, for example firemen. These people enter in houses in fire, risking their lives or burning themselves. They don't receive any payment because this work is voluntary. So it is not logic that __firemen does__ not win money. Another example are nurses, they expend all night long taking care of patients, in addition that they do not sleep in some cases.

In order to do a fair situation, these entertainers and TV stars should earn money according to their activities. They do not do a lot of difficult activities but __win a lot of money __. They just appear a few hours in TV and talk. __As long__ these entertainers and TV stars have a pretty face, it does not matter what they do, even a bad work in TV. In some cases athletes do not work hard and receive money by just doing TV comercials, moreover, they take advantage of the fame and charge a high quantity just for appear in a interview and stuff like that. This situatuation __can not__ continue like that.

__In other hand __ maybe some athletes and entertainers deserve win a lot of money by their hard work. Athletes always do exercise and at the end of the day they are exhausted and start over again the next day. They compete in games winning medals and money for poor people. Sometimes, even these athletes donate their high amounts of money to associations who need it. There are too some good entertainers that do an excellente job. Maybe they do not deserve winning that much money, but at least they work a little more than anothers.

People need to learn the value of each work in society. Nurses, doctors, firemen, teachers are anonymous heroes that do not __recieve__ enough payment by the work, furthermore their work area and work conditions are deplorable. It does not __means__ that they do their jobs for money but this situation is not fair. Even so when TV stars and actors live their lifes comfortable by just doing nothing. This situation maybe __can not__ change that easy but if we people understand it, we can solve it and make a more fair situation for everyone.