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Outline (**//__Follow outline format discussed in class.__//**) Thesis Statement: ‍The people should not drive drunk because they cause damage to other cars, damage to other people and even death. 1. Material Damages. 2.Human Damages. 3. The Death.
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[|"A drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts] ” – //Chinese proverb//. For many years drinking alcohol has been considered a taboo. In take of such beverages coupled with the driving of a car is often a fatal mix. The ways in which it affects the drunk driving are many. People should not drive drunk because they cause damage to other cars, damage to other people and even death.
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Firstly, the cars involved are severely damaged. Surely __acar__ accident generates huge losses for those who commit it. According to a study by Ohio State University a debt of a person who causes a traffic accident is usually the equivalent of his salary for 4 months. The economic instability usually last a long time for the debtor. Although property damage is the most frequent of course there are also physical damages.

Second, people driving drunk__ use to __ hurt other people badly. Road accidents are highly hazardous to the person who receives the impact and for the one who provokes it. One in three people worldwide have been participants in at least one automobile accident, and the 80% of them are left __withsequelae__. Bruises, trauma and serious __injuriesare__ the result __ofsuch__ terrible events. Accidents due to alcoholism are of a magnitude so great that even they can take the life of the people.

Finally, death __in__ __a__ person driving while intoxicated by __alcoholis__ fatal. The incidence of deaths due to motor vehicle collisions is the most common around the world. The probability of dying in a car accident is three times __that to die__ __in a botched abortion performed __. The probability of dying is even bigger if it is added factor of alcoholism. For drunk people take a fraction of a second distracted or falling asleep while driving and this time just to trigger a catastrophe that kills innocent people and themselves.

The consequences of drunk driving are adverse and often dangerous. Often occur which are often irreversible damage. Perhaps for many people driving while intoxicated them represents something simple and even exciting. Statistics do not lie and the dangers are the order of the day. Because it causes serious damage to property, physical and even death people should not drive drunk.


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