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 * Brainstorming. **Dangerous, alcohol, accidents, deaths, drivers, preventable, drink, problem, sober, drunk, car, highway, speed.

1.-The problem of drivers and alcohol. l. - alcohol abuse ll. – consequences 2. - Solutions (**//__Be more specific.__//**) l. - punished with jail if someone drives drunk ll. - increase Breathalyzertest 3. - Ways to prevent an accident l. - abstain from alcohol ll. -designate a driver
 * Outline. **

There are too many problems related with alcohol abuse. Nowadays car accidents levels are increasing due to alcohol abuse. People should know that there are a lot of consequences including dead. However we can prevent drunk-driving accidents. The main solution to reduce drunk-driving accidents is designate a driver because alcohol affects your coordination.
 * Thesis statement **<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;">The main solution to reduce drunk-driving accidents is designate a driver because alcohol affects your coordination.
 * //__Add a title to your essay.__//**

<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;">Most of the car accidents are linked with alcohol. People may think that this cannot happen to them. <range type="comment" id="375769">However, is a fact that alcohol affects your coordination and you become more susceptible to have an accident. Keep in mind that if you drive drunk you are putting <range type="comment" id="350367">at risk your live. Most of these accidents end in tragedy. **__//Make sure you follow the MEAL plan when developing body paragraphs. Your final sentence should link an idea to your next paragraph.//__**

<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;">**//__This topic sentence needs to link to your outline.__//** Government should increase fines and also punish with jail. If government __implementsthese__ __measuresaccidents__ levels will reduce. Also government should forbid drinks sold after 2 o’ clock. If this measure does not work the government should close the clubs at __2__. And increasing the alcohol breath test this problem will be reduced significantly. Your sentences tend to be choppy. Use more sentence connectors and write more complex and compound sentences.

<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;"><range type="comment" id="656465">We can prevent these accidents making actions such as abstain from alcohol or designate a driver. <range type="comment" id="177982">If want to have fun is preferable to choose other types of fun instead to go to a club. For example<range type="comment" id="779931"> you can make a party at home you do not have to drive so you can drink as much as you want. But, if you prefer to go to a club the best way to prevent an accident is designate a <range type="comment" id="920002">driver this action will reduce the possibility of an accident.

<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;">You have to be very responsible if you want to drink **<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;">. **<span style="font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 16px;"> Remember that your __live__ and others are in your hands. We never know when the situation can get out of control. So, you have to take into consideration these points.The main solution to reduce drunk-driving accidents is designate a driver because alcohol affects your coordination.


 * //__Note: Try writing more complex and compound sentences.__//**